Review Detail of Ravenoushiroi in Red Flower of the Night

I first saw this story idea in a writing prompt somewhere, reading it now, I realized that the person who write the story idea is the author. According to the table of contents, her updates are every other day and I'm amazed because she said there that she doesn't know anything about games but she can write a story about gaming! And update consistently even when she's sick! I created this account specifically to give this story a review because I think it deserves it!