I'm going to be completely honest, this is a rinse and repeat plot used a million times throughout the enjoy. Perhaps other people can enjoy it but at this point, I am quite sick of it. In the future I hope to see an original take from you, maybe not something cliché. In terms of writing quality, its quite good. A few hiccups here and there but it won't be noticed by a regular reader. Enjoyed the writing, didn't stay for the plot. I hope you will use this review as an aspect of improvement rather than hold a grudge against me. I wish you good luck in your endeavors.
Simp_Chaos
Liked it!
me gustaI have mentioned this in the review but I will say it again, I hope you don't get a grudge from the review. I never suggested that you originally had a grudge against me I have merely pointed out my opinion of your novel and nothing else. After all, that is what reviews are. If you call people "npc's" in real life then I believe you have a real problem sir. Anyways, I wish you luck in your endeavors. No harm done.
Simp_Chaos:Who tf are you ah? I legit don't remember you, much less even have a grudge against you. Another random npc saying I hate them? Cool, ig.