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Review Detail of Sondre in Harry Potter: Wanted

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a fresh new take on the pretty standard crossover of Harry Potter x Marvel. Canon gets derailed in chapter one and the train exploded completely, no foreseeable way for it to end up following canon again. The mc was a hardened criminal in his past life and he has no goal of stopping in this life, he has no qualms about killing people that get in his way. The writing quality is really good, some spelling mistakes here and there, but can't really expect more from a free story without an editor. Hope the story keeps going strong as it has to this point. Great job so far!

Harry Potter: Wanted

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Hi, I'm SrCuervo and I'm writing an HP novel where your help would be very useful, I hope you can read it so you can tell me what you think. It's called Harry Potter: Narnia and The World Hidden in a Closet.