I only got thru 12 chapters before stopping. I don’t know if it is poor translation or the author doesn’t know which point of view they are writing the story in but it makes it hard to read. On top of the scene jumping it all gets confusing. I feel the potential for the story is great. I love a good OP mc. I just feel there is a lot that isn’t explained. Ope I just magically got an item inventory. Ope pain resistance can be considered a talent. Maybe it gets better in later chapters especially the pov but someone else will have to stick around to find out.
MadScythe
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me gustaI don’t mind reading and reviewing for people. I checked your page and only see 2 works. I don’t generally read romance novels but could give it a shot if it’s xiaxia just let me know which work it is.
ZelretchTheTaoist:if you're interested I'm also writing a xianxia webnovel if you have the time you can come take a look and leave a comment on what you think about it
Arodicus:I don’t mind reading and reviewing for people. I checked your page and only see 2 works. I don’t generally read romance novels but could give it a shot if it’s xiaxia just let me know which work it is.