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▪︎ Writing Quality..............☆☆☆○○ - needs some work ▪︎ Story Development.......☆☆☆○○ - no development so far. - no change from the original story. - this is the type of story when the mc (yasuo) simply follows the original mc (tanjiro). I hope that the author change this. ▪︎ Character Design..........☆☆○○○ - Character Design is good. (because it's yasuo) - I gave 2☆ because their's no backstory. ▪︎ Updating Stability.........☆☆☆☆○ ▪︎ World Background........☆☆○○○ - I'm slightly disappointed. because this is one of those "easy made ff". when I say "easy made ff", it's the type of ff when the author copy's the original story and just copy paste an oc or any character from a different story.

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