Review Detail of jacke_m1 in in douluo dalu 2 ?

Item: in douluo dalu 2 ?
Rating: 3.4

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jacke_m1Autor1yrjacke_m1

rating my work honestly, what you think?

jacke_m1

Liked it!

me gusta

Azathoth2Lv4Azathoth2

is this a harem??

1yr

LycratLv13Lycrat

Its confusing sometimes to me. Use grammerly

1yr

jacke_m1Autorjacke_m1

yup, 4 max

Azathoth2:is this a harem??

1yr

jacke_m1Autorjacke_m1

any tip for writing and descripting fight scenes?

1yr