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jacke_m1
jacke_m1Autor1yrjacke_m1

rating my work honestly, what you think?

in douluo dalu 2 ?

jacke_m1

Liked it!

me gusta

Respuestas4

Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4Azathoth2

is this a harem??

Observant_Reader
Observant_ReaderLv13Observant_Reader

Its confusing sometimes to me. Use grammerly

jacke_m1
jacke_m1Autorjacke_m1

yup, 4 max

Azathoth2:is this a harem??
jacke_m1
jacke_m1Autorjacke_m1

any tip for writing and descripting fight scenes?