.....................................................................................I just want more people to see, original work on Qidian
MTL_Lopes
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me gustaIf this were edited I would have liked to read it here. But it's even worse than the one on mtlnovel so I'll read it there. I'll mention a few things I noticed in chapter 1. First of all, capital letters: there are none. Then some sentences seem to have words added in that shouldn't be there. For example in this mtl you copied from somewhere in chapter 1 paragraph 2: 'and in this attic, there is a person sitting in front of a lamp assembling some kind of electronic device.' But mtlnovel is like this: 'In this attic, there is a person sitting in front of a lamp assembling some kind of electronic equipment.'