Review Detail of funmaxwell in A Saiyan in The MCU

so I don't normally write reviews because it takes a while and a lot of energy out of me. But I wanted to write one for this story because it was amazing. the story is great so far for the first eight chapters and the only complaint. I could really Levy against the story out of chapter 8 is some minor grammar issues that took away from my ability to enjoy the story a little bit. but the dialogue and the character's and story development are done well so far. One direction I was thinking the story could go sense some of the skills that were purely magical in the dragon Ball series are being substituted with Ki in the story. is to start his own sect like the hand or the nine rings and build an inner circle of trusted members and help them unlock their ability to use Ki by either using a fruit of might or by one the potential unlocking skills like gurus or the elder Kai technique. I could see the main character mainly doing this to increase his variety of techniques over the millenia and to make humans more fun to fight. in other words he'd help them unlock their ki and teach them some basics techniques and see what techniques people invent over the millennia and then copy them and keep the most useful techniques. also excited anticipating the next chapter and keep up the good work.