I can see this story is giving a kind of mystery like a scattered puzzle that eventually readers need to find the exact place and that is how you write a mystery! The author has done a great job. Grammatical errors are fine as long as it's understandable for the story. I've done a lot too and learned from that experience. I hope you keep updated on this novel and reached the top! *added to fav
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