Writing Quality: Really, Really good, there are very few errors in the entirety of the fanfic. Updating Stability: From what I can tell, it’s updated consistently Story Development: Really good, there isn’t any rushed or forced moments, and it’s not to quickly paced. Character Design: Pietro (Or the new Pietro) is smart, and thinks before he acts, he doesn’t make needless or pointless mistakes, and is overall a smart and well made character. World Background: it’s the MCU, but there is more background on Pietro and Wanda’s life. Overall: A really good fanfic, and a great read. I’m excited to read more chapters and fanfics from this author!
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Thanks for the review! Can't really tell you how much this means to me! I am writing on a few other stories at the moment, so stay tuned for when I upload them! Enjoy the story!
Question? You make good stories, so are you going to write a DC one. Plz do if not then what movies,tv shows or comics are you gonna use.
GodOfFreedom:Thanks for the review! Can't really tell you how much this means to me! I am writing on a few other stories at the moment, so stay tuned for when I upload them! Enjoy the story!
To be honest I am not even very knowledgeable about Marvel, even with hours upon hours of research. And even then my knowledge of Marvel is leagues ahead of DC, so it will be very hard to write a good story about that franchise. I can't say I won't, but not any time soon. Though I had the idea for a crossover with some of the DC characters I know of, but that's not even half an idea, much less a complete story. The stories I am currently working on are several actually with a Naruto, One Piece, Twilight, Harry Potter, MHA and Soul Land being among them. I am currently also thinking about starting one in the X-Men Universe, as I really love the possibilities that come with having Mutant powers. And I think it would make an interesting story. I have upload some chapters of the Naruto and One Piece FF on my p@treon and will probably do the same here on webnovel in a few days.
Retro_Plaid:Question? You make good stories, so are you going to write a DC one. Plz do if not then what movies,tv shows or comics are you gonna use.
If you don't mind me asking is the Harry Potter is still in work before being published?
GodOfFreedom:To be honest I am not even very knowledgeable about Marvel, even with hours upon hours of research. And even then my knowledge of Marvel is leagues ahead of DC, so it will be very hard to write a good story about that franchise. I can't say I won't, but not any time soon. Though I had the idea for a crossover with some of the DC characters I know of, but that's not even half an idea, much less a complete story. The stories I am currently working on are several actually with a Naruto, One Piece, Twilight, Harry Potter, MHA and Soul Land being among them. I am currently also thinking about starting one in the X-Men Universe, as I really love the possibilities that come with having Mutant powers. And I think it would make an interesting story. I have upload some chapters of the Naruto and One Piece FF on my p@treon and will probably do the same here on webnovel in a few days.
The Harry Potter is still in my head to be honest. It's an idea I head for some time now, but I try to keep the stories I am writing simultaneously to a minimum, because it is hard to finish them otherwise(FYI: I learned that the hard way, as I have roughly a dozen works only a few pages long that I dropped midway.) Currently I am trying to finish the One Piece FF, as I have worked out most of the plot and thus relatively easy to finish. Afterwards, I will probably start with the HP FF, though there is a lot of work to be done on research alone, so I can't really estimate hwo long that might take.
DaoistqROXko:If you don't mind me asking is the Harry Potter is still in work before being published?
This has lemon?
GodOfFreedom:Thanks for the review! Can't really tell you how much this means to me! I am writing on a few other stories at the moment, so stay tuned for when I upload them! Enjoy the story!
Yes.
Konrad_The_Fourth:This has lemon?
nice
GodOfFreedom:Yes.
Twilight plz
GodOfFreedom:To be honest I am not even very knowledgeable about Marvel, even with hours upon hours of research. And even then my knowledge of Marvel is leagues ahead of DC, so it will be very hard to write a good story about that franchise. I can't say I won't, but not any time soon. Though I had the idea for a crossover with some of the DC characters I know of, but that's not even half an idea, much less a complete story. The stories I am currently working on are several actually with a Naruto, One Piece, Twilight, Harry Potter, MHA and Soul Land being among them. I am currently also thinking about starting one in the X-Men Universe, as I really love the possibilities that come with having Mutant powers. And I think it would make an interesting story. I have upload some chapters of the Naruto and One Piece FF on my p@treon and will probably do the same here on webnovel in a few days.
But i hope you stay with this one as your main work for now
GodOfFreedom:The Harry Potter is still in my head to be honest. It's an idea I head for some time now, but I try to keep the stories I am writing simultaneously to a minimum, because it is hard to finish them otherwise(FYI: I learned that the hard way, as I have roughly a dozen works only a few pages long that I dropped midway.) Currently I am trying to finish the One Piece FF, as I have worked out most of the plot and thus relatively easy to finish. Afterwards, I will probably start with the HP FF, though there is a lot of work to be done on research alone, so I can't really estimate hwo long that might take.
Soul land 🥰🥰🥰
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