The beginning is good and gives some context of his early life, perhaps the only oddity is the quick bond that forms between him and his friend.
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me gustathanks for the review but I'll correct something, it's not yet a bond but a feeling. Yes, it was rushed but hope you know stuff bout werewolves...how their wolves growl when they feel their mate. It's the same for Miles but Asher won't know of it till many chapters later. It'll be a one-sided love and feeling for Miles till God knows when.