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BumbleboiLv22yr
2022-05-24 19:08

the story is good and all but please show some more POV of main character as it gets boring with many dialogues. and it is quite good if you improve that aspect. give a try to my novel as well https://www.webnovel.com/book/genghis-khan's-acolyte--a-rising-havoc_23328009505896005

Tales of the Demon Hero

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79 Chs

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Sunus_Writes
Sunus_WritesLv2

The first thing that drew my attention to this book is the art at which the dialogue is presented, one can be rest assured that the book has a very good turnout. The only flaw that I spotted was that the book had too long chapters and that kinda bored me a bit. Apart from that and a few grammatical errors, the book is of the best variety that you can find

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thefirespeaks
thefirespeaksLv11

This is not my cup of tea story. The first chapters threw me out of place. I really didn't quite understand what was happening. It was somewhat good but it can barely reach half of my interest back. Additionally, the writing needs some serious syntax editing. Nevertheless, it is still a good read. Keep writing, author! You'll get there! :)

2yr
Hassy_101
Hassy_101Lv14

Ok! This book reminds me of...I think a Japanese supernatural drama I watched years back. It's an interesting book, although it can do well with some editing, the characters were well designed and the use of English was superb. I love it.

2yr
loti_apathae
loti_apathaeLv13

It's unique! It's pretty interesting though! ..............................................................................................................................................................................

2yr
MorbidWriter
MorbidWriterLv10

This is definitely one of the strangest books I've ever read. That's not to say it's bad. On the contrary, the story has a uniqueness to it. It reminds me of mangas that are novelized. In a way, it's refreshing to see an author try out his own style of writing rather than conform. If you're looking for something new and interesting give this story a try.

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SilentWraithz
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This is a novel where the dialogue is interesting and what makes the novel fun and give the right mood of the setting. Some grammar mistakes on some chapters, but not bad enough to see it or make you want to point it out.

2yr
TheSuccessor
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The book is pretty good, and I had quite a bit of fun reading it.

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Phoenix_10
Phoenix_10Lv11

A good read to be unlocked. It has a good plot and storyline. There is only problems with the grammars. But, the main problem the author should pay close attention to is the alignment of the scenes and introduction of new characters. This book is like a diamond in the rough and after it's polished, everything would be fine.

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Mediocre_author
Mediocre_authorLv1

Great story! My biggest complaint about this novel so far is that I didn't read it sooner! Overall, great job and I'm sure the rest will be just as good!

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Rathowm
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Its wonderfully poetic, a great novel. I'm only a short ways in, but I love these characters and their dialogue so much. Chapters are long, which is good. There is a lot of content to read, and I'm looking forward to more

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