Probably the best work on this app. You don't pander to people who want to self insert as the main character that much. Writing style, syntax, grammar, basically perfect. I love how you're playing with the world and it's characters. You keep things consistent (personality, characters, butterfly effects, etc). Just everything seems very new and refreshing. Only wish you could update more, but I don't even mind that much since your work is such high quality.
Killer_Slut
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