Review Detail of GolDEn_TurkEy in The Dark To Light

yeah me too

this has potential. Just improve the grammar to make it easily understandable. Right now it is too difficult to understand what are you trying to say in the story sometimes. everything is good right now except for grammar so just work on it a little bit. thank you for the chapters.

I'll try thanks for feedback

I agree, I commented a few edits. Plus the summary needs to be fixed and edited.

I meant I agree with the guy getting replied to. I to fix so sentences but I am getting a headache. It is really confusing even on the first chapter/page.

I'll try