Hello readers, Author here. This is the first novel I have written. This novel includes what I would in a novel where MC has the memory of this Earth. Treat this review as a Q&A page. Comment your questions, I will try to answer as long as it does not contain spoilers.
SomDxD
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me gustaLike many similar novels, I decided to leave the original novel name blank. I might add it later if it is required but for now, there is no name.
Dyno_goku:can you tell me name of the original novel. without our oc
I want to see the characters photos but cannot find them that's the reason I want to see the original novel so i can who is who
SomDxD:Like many similar novels, I decided to leave the original novel name blank. I might add it later if it is required but for now, there is no name.
Ya que tiene los recuerdos de su yo de la tierra DEBERIA aprovecharlos al maximo siempre me molesto que los MC no usen todo lo que saben para empoderarse por ejemplo un MC que termine en naruto se apega a naruto sin intentar recrear tecnicas de otros animes como un kame hame ha hecho de chakra y lo mismo pasa en muc en dragon ball u otra serie por eso digo ya que tiene el conocimiento DEBERIA USARLO lo mismo para tu MC por que no recrea tecnicas de otros animes y juegos en este mundo ?? Incluso los clones normales de naruto que son ilusiones serian ultra utiles solo mira a blake de RWBY y su semblanza Hay MUCHAS cosas que podria hacer para volverse poderoso pero los ignoran por completo incluso el conocimiento de sus estudios en la TIERRA deberian darle ventaja podria usar su conocimiento para controlar mejor la magia elemental incluso usar ejercicios de control de otras series para controlar mejor su magia,etc En fin eso es todo lo que queria decir este fanfic tuyo es muy bueno hasta ahora por eso te digo esto no hagas que MC desperdice su conocimiento de la tierra como otros MC haz que lo aproveche al maximo y no solo se centre en las cosas de la novela
Zamir:Will the mc have the memory of other alternate selves instead of just his life on earth?
Thank you for your kind words. This is really my first novel or any kind of writing for that matter. I planned to release at least 10 chapters in a week from now on.
R0Y:hey mr author just want to that can we trust that this novel gonna have daily updates coz the content is great it doesn't look like your a first timer though but it'd be great if you release a chapter daily
that's great to hear it's really an exciting experience to journey with the book and trust me this is also one of a kind and the real reason isn't in the mob character development of strength but the characters and the story development which always gives a twirk here and there and makes the story goes on. I'm really looking forward for the upcoming chapters thank you
SomDxD:Thank you for your kind words. This is really my first novel or any kind of writing for that matter. I planned to release at least 10 chapters in a week from now on.
SomDxD:Thank you for your kind words. This is really my first novel or any kind of writing for that matter. I planned to release at least 10 chapters in a week from now on.