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Rating: 4.4

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WonkeyLv12yrWonkey

It's a pretty fun read, no major issues but the paragraphs are really thick. The characters also sometimes feel off but not downright bad. Overall this is a pretty good read with good quality writing!

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WonkeyLv1Wonkey

I think I worded it a bit wrong, It's not that thick of a paragraph but it feels thick. There are a lot of commas that extend some sentences unessisarily.

2yr

StormzzAutorStormzz

Thanks for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed the read. I recently changed the paragraphs in earlier chapters because they were pretty long, do you mind giving me any examples of the paragraphs you're referring to? Also, could you be a little more specific with regards to the characters, just in case I missed something? Once again, thank you for the review.

2yr

StormzzAutorStormzz

Ah I see. I'll keep it in mind.

Wonkey:I think I worded it a bit wrong, It's not that thick of a paragraph but it feels thick. There are a lot of commas that extend some sentences unessisarily.

2yr