Review Detail of Jeremy_Babb in New World Magic System in Asoiaf

i am loving this story so far, it seem to be going in a good direction. great writing, and great use of the HP magic system. i like that the system does not force or constantly bring up quests for MC. i hate when stories with a system does that, as it makes the MC sound like a slave to it. overall good job, and DO NOT let this die out. [img=recommend]