Review Detail of crazy_wizard in True Essence

Thanks for taking your time to review. :) If possible I would like to know till which chapter you've read, or which chapter made you point this out. I hope you can give my story a chance some other time, my writting gets better as the story progresses, or at least I think it does, hahaha.

I've read till chapter 46, it's not much but some things did not sit well with me. In the middle was a chapter where the mc narrated an entire 'scene' to someone else which should not happen. Imo it should have been made into a separate scene, which the mc remembers as a flashback. There were other things like too little information on the mc. The mystery needs to be hidden I know, but you've gotta give the reader at least something, or it will become boring quickly. Those mysteries just help the mc sometimes like plot armor and then vanish like they were never there and the mc suspects nothing(maybe that or he just doesn't want to remember, or like he's running away from them). These were two things that didn't sit well with me. Thank you. If this story becomes better later I will pick it up again maybe