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Review Detail of KSIndra in Man?Monster?God?.

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I like the story, the narration is very detailed, but I was very distracted while reading, because, at the end of the sentence there are no punctuation marks. And sometimes there's a double "." and ",". and if there are words that are still one sentence, it is better to put them together. If you want to separate, it's better to put a punctuation mark "." at the end of the sentence. for the content of the story I really like it. very good narration and explains the background story is also very cool. always keep spirit.

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