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Good idea but could use some work such as autocorrect and some more details to the work. Good first try but grammar is bad and needs a whole lot of work. This also needs some extra work in background, details, and transitions. Excited to see how author progresses with his work.

Reborn in One Piece as a Fox with limitless potential

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