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learn how to write before starting a story. You use too many similar words that your writing blends together. Along with not checking if what you spelled was correct or grammatically eligible. I would also work on describing scenes because I couldn't tell what was happening because it was all just talking no description of anything.

X-men: Lone wolf

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