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Item: What is my role in this novel?
Rating: 5

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secretplotterLv22yrsecretplotter

For now its good but i think the more you write the more the story will become better just continuo and good luck to you Author

What is my role in this novel?

Hystroixs_Lv99

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secretplotterLv2secretplotter

also dont make it dumb with girls and harem smoking hot teacher and hot nurse i see what you doing there just stop doing that make the story have more depth good luck

2yr