First chapter looks promising, rebirth seemed kinda quick , and wtf he was born in a battlefield?? Writing seems solid tho not too cliche and author isn’t just skipping over early years of MC
Thanks for the input!, you will find out more about his parents later and why he was born there. Yes I want to flesh out his early years as a dislike when there is no proper character progression. Don't worry tho I will skip over the boring parts and I don't plan to spend to long in his childhood:)