Review Detail of ShaDinG in Battle Of The Bulgars

A very shameless self review to talk about some stuff, i just 3 days this book or fanfic ebook has over 1400 views and I dont get how!!?!? I just wanted to clarify me going from much of a personal level on the character when writing to a narrator talking about the event. I cant put my mind into which would be better and I want to do the way I like. So just want to clarify that I might do vice versa writing so please dont drop it if you see the writing as not pleasable.