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lazyotaku68
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I like the story, and when theres action it’s heavily entertaining. But theres a lot of cheesy pointless dialogue between Alex and Emily, we don’t need to know everything that happens between, especially when it adds little to no importance to the story. Like when Emily asks for Ice Cream, and then it shows us Alex’s reaction to Emily wanting Ice Cream, and then Emily’s reaction to Alex’s reaction to Emily wanting Ice Cream, you get where I’m going with this?

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Casual_Reader09
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true tho, it's like the author is trying too hard to make a "cute" scene. I really like wholesome stories but too much is just cringy.