Review Detail of jeanpierregerardo in God of system in Onepiece ff
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It started like all one piece fanfics, since nothing starts out perfect, the protagonist is the typical one who wants to live quietly accompanied by any girls he meets by his sight, then comes the demerit of the story (where he gives Buggy a system, using the excuse that he is taking advantage of, while the protagonist olgasanea and is just having fun), not to mention that until chapter 10, I was hoping that the protagonist changes and stops being lazy, but no, now he became a secondary character that just waits for the points to come to it (it's so frustrating), there is no development, among other things.
God of system in Onepiece ff
H_kima
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If I were the protagonist first, I would become strong, because I am in a world where at any moment, a power appears and can kill you, even if you have your fruit (because you are a newbie), among other things, less relax and do everything what your protagonist does, and I would not be lazy depending on another to strengthen me (I would continue to leave my will for a big comment, but I'm sleepy xD).
H_kima:Dude think of yourself as the one living the life there. I don't know about you, but i would not want to go around full fighting mode.
H_kima:Dude think of yourself as the one living the life there. I don't know about you, but i would not want to go around full fighting mode.
but no one wants to read that, we honestly couldn't care less about what u want to do, its about what you write. It's like watching paint dry, its not fun. I haven't even read the fic and I'm only writing this cause your point is so stupid.
H_kima:Dude think of yourself as the one living the life there. I don't know about you, but i would not want to go around full fighting mode.
Most important thing: That it's a fiction not real.... furthermore fiction is only intersting because, we can become something we can't be on real world... . So, if author writes it as if what would he do if it's real..... ( then that's dum dum 😂) . Hope you understand this simple concept & make the mc op
H_kima:Dude think of yourself as the one living the life there. I don't know about you, but i would not want to go around full fighting mode.