For now, I will give this story the highest score. The story seems quite interesting and captivating, the characters seem to be well thought out and all, the only thing that seems a bit rushed is the pacing, I would recommend you to work there a little more, but otherwise I have high expectations from this story, and I hope I will not be disappointed. Keep working and good luck at writing [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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