Review Detail of Dawn_of_magic in THE RETURN OF THE LOST DEMON

Hi guys, author here, I like reading cultivation books and fantasy webtoons, eating cakes and basically other delicious foods, and watching movies. This is my first book so I'm going to rate it personally on how well I think it is. I'd like to grow as an author and appreciate it of you guys generously support me and leave some helpful reviews and comments as I start my journey of writing. THANKS