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Review Detail of MrLollip0p in Journey Throuhout The Multiverse

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MrLollip0p
MrLollip0pLv142yrMrLollip0p

😙👌. Minimal grammar errors. Great story. To increase quality if your novel I suggest you reduce the info-dumping to 'just what is needed' for that particular time and your line breaks look... not so appealing tbh. But ngl even the info dumping was immersive. you have talent my brother, you just need to refine and polish your writing style.

Journey Throuhout The Multiverse

Iam_Cat

Liked it!

me gusta

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Iam_Cat
Iam_CatAutorIam_Cat

Thanks