Review Detail of CopyPaste1 in Hadrian Peverell in Twilight

Item: Hadrian Peverell in Twilight
Rating: 3

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CopyPaste1Lv132yrCopyPaste1

maybe the idea was good but has grammar errors. The biggest problem, the story need a good Edit and i mean a REALLY good Edit. .

Hadrian Peverell in Twilight

Just_for_fun1997

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cheelzyLv12cheelzy

maybe the story's idea was good but IT has grammar errors the biggest problem is THAT it needs a good editor AND I MEAN VERY (SUPER MEGA VERY) GOOD EDITOR ( you my man needs some milk (English lessons) )

2yr

HultraLv14Hultra

Tried to read first paragraph. Firsth thought after reading was: "Is this truly the authors mastery of english or am i reading something that went through Google Translate?"

2yr