Review Detail of TheMortalGod in The Creature Inside Me

I am not used to reading this type of genre, so can't really assess the plot direction but the things I can assess upon are top-notch. -The sentence flow is immersive as they all string nicely together and are easy to go through. - less exposition is always a welcoming element. - Consistent Third Person viewpoint. -found no grammatical errors which are always appealing to the readers.