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Scott_Padgett
Scott_PadgettLv22yrScott_Padgett

I love the author’s creativity in writing and the way they immerse themselves into their characters, giving them their own realistic touches, the only thing that might could use some work is the wording but a great book to read

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Scott_PadgettLv2Scott_Padgett

It mainly feels as though the paragraphs are in pieces and not fluid and easily read and sometimes it seems that the words are misplaced sometimes

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can u suggest me what wordings shld I improve on...so that I mind while writing my next chapter.