Review Detail of LordShivaStories in An octopus's tale

Read all of the eight chapters and can say author is improving his craft, also the book has a lot of potential along with having an interesting plotline. Some parts fill scary. Now the negative some parts feel stiff like conversation and description. Don't fit many words in one paragraph try give space. Improve on the conversation and pacing. No hate just kept the opinion since you want to improve. I really think this novel has potential and I wholeheartedly recommend.