Review Detail of Akira_Monadelle in Ghosts & Souls

I'm sorry but I only give honest reviews and so, I'm going to be very honest. This novel is unreadable, I'm sorry for sounding harsh but it's a total mess. The novel lacks everything a novel should have. There's too much problems to list out. I recommend that the author read other novels beforehand and attempt this novel again. From the messy first chapter, I could tell that the plot is very cool but that's all that's good about this. This is my honest review, I apologize if you were hurt by my words.