the world background is great the characters design is great but the grammar and the writing quality isn't great please this the story will be better if the grammar and the writing quality is great but overall the story is great keep it up 😀
EdwinRBM
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me gustaEdwinRBM:My level of English is -5 therefore I only use a translator, if the novel becomes more famous maybe those who asked me to publish the novel will help me translate, otherwise the bad English will continue until the novel is finished, I'm sorry because.