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Andry_Reyes
Andry_ReyesLv12yrAndry_Reyes

Definitely an interesting premise! The plot and characters are intriguing so far, but! A lot of typos, basic grammatical errors, and missed punctuations, and sometimes it feels like the story could be narrated better so hopefully you fix that! lots of potential in this story! I recommend using grammarly(you don't have to pay) to fix most of your issues!! a good read overall?

The Queen and Her Human

JacobMWierzba

Liked it!

me gusta

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JacobMWierzba
JacobMWierzbaAutorJacobMWierzba

Thank you for the comment, I have made the correct changes.

Andry_Reyes
Andry_ReyesLv1Andry_Reyes

the question mark in the end is supposed to be an exclamation point so dont mind it