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Review Detail of Trim_2cool in My First Test

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Author review? Nothing new. However, I will actually give some pros and cons of the book with a short book description for those that dislike the synopsis. What is the book about?: (First Arc Only) Its a fantasy based world with lots of magic, where Ojero and Orpham are brothers. Both are the sons of a duke, with Orpham being the heir. When they turn 14, both are blessed with mythical powers (The rarest), with Orpham gaining light and space based power while Ojero gains Time, Shadow, and a [CURRENTLY] unknown power. The story revolves around Ojero's evil and cynical personality and how it causes friction between himself and his brother at Lumenbecs Academy, a very prestigious magic school. Pros -Unique magic system that had a lot of time put into it. -Evil MC! -Brother conflict that makes sense and allows the characters to stick to their roles. -Active updates? If you have notifications on, this may very well be a con with the constant updates ;) -There will be a romantic subplot -Clear notification when swapping character POV's. (Ojero is default) -Constantly changing map of the continent to show change that the MC doesn't directly cause. Hard to imagine the MC not causing every little thing in the universe, but try to stick with me here. Cons -Its my first work, so it may not be up the par with other novels. -Not too many chapters right now -Word count per chapter isn't too much. (Trying to increase it) -Evil MC! For some this is a con. -MC's are pretty powerful.

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