The MC Should not start to kill police officers without any reason. The MC mistakenly killed someone and to escape from the police he started to kill. Dude this is not how it works. Change the plot. Either the MC should know that he is killing Felons or the MC and Police should both be a part of the escape program and the bullets are fake. An MC should not go on a pointless killing spree of Police Officers. A MC is like a light(maybe he shines in the light or hides in the darkness). An MC can never kill innocents. This goes against the rule of Protagonists. Or You can also change the crime of Mc and make it that he killed a corrupted high level official and when the police force tries to catch him he only kills the ones who have been corrupt or are up to no good(His system can help him identify the type of police officer the person following him is). This can allow the MC to stop killing innocents and also allow most of the plot to go unedited.
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I'm gonna be honest with you it has been a long time since I saw a actual "good guy" MC. Be it originals or translated ones I only see morally gray ones at best with the majority of the ones I see could pass off as villains.
Colr_Gren:If you look long enough, you will find that there are a lot of MCs that save and help random people just because they are “righteous” and “just”. They waste their resources and time, plus effort, just to save random people. And don’t get me started about when they see women.
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I’ll have to disagree with you in the whole “killing innocents goes against the rules of a protagonist”. A protagonist is a main character of a story, and can have any personality. Personally, generic goody two shoes MCs are getting too generic and boring.
I agree, but the killing in the novel is pointless as especially since he isn't a complete lunatic.
Colr_Gren:I’ll have to disagree with you in the whole “killing innocents goes against the rules of a protagonist”. A protagonist is a main character of a story, and can have any personality. Personally, generic goody two shoes MCs are getting too generic and boring.
Please tell me where on this site that you've found a goody two shoes.
Colr_Gren:I’ll have to disagree with you in the whole “killing innocents goes against the rules of a protagonist”. A protagonist is a main character of a story, and can have any personality. Personally, generic goody two shoes MCs are getting too generic and boring.
If you look long enough, you will find that there are a lot of MCs that save and help random people just because they are “righteous” and “just”. They waste their resources and time, plus effort, just to save random people. And don’t get me started about when they see women.
FunnyMessage:Please tell me where on this site that you've found a goody two shoes.
I hate MCs like that author just too lazy and stretches out story by helping random people and getting into unnecessary problems
Colr_Gren:If you look long enough, you will find that there are a lot of MCs that save and help random people just because they are “righteous” and “just”. They waste their resources and time, plus effort, just to save random people. And don’t get me started about when they see women.
Waiting for the dislime button for reviews. Being a protagonist doesn't mean that you are a good person, it just means that the story follows you and revolves around. A perfect example be the protagonist of Overlord and Soul of Negary.
Im going to be honest with you. When I say “righteous MC”, Im not talking about MCs that do not kill, because most MCs kill nowadays and if they don’t, there is a example of a extremely righteous MC, Im talking about MCs who save random people for the sake of making them look cool or maybe making them look like a white knight with shining armor, and if you want to go all the way, why not make them ride a white horse, maybe even a unicorn, with white flower petals drifting across the scenery with a rainbow in the backround while the mood is cheerful and gay, and of corse, don’t forget to make him handsome, to the readers. It is just unnecessary to risk your life and resources for random people. Most MCs have a reason for pushinh forward and it does not make sense for them to risk everything they lived their life for for random people.
RichBoyWinston:I'm gonna be honest with you it has been a long time since I saw a actual "good guy" MC. Be it originals or translated ones I only see morally gray ones at best with the majority of the ones I see could pass off as villains.
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Colr_Gren:Im going to be honest with you. When I say “righteous MC”, Im not talking about MCs that do not kill, because most MCs kill nowadays and if they don’t, there is a example of a extremely righteous MC, Im talking about MCs who save random people for the sake of making them look cool or maybe making them look like a white knight with shining armor, and if you want to go all the way, why not make them ride a white horse, maybe even a unicorn, with white flower petals drifting across the scenery with a rainbow in the backround while the mood is cheerful and gay, and of corse, don’t forget to make him handsome, to the readers. It is just unnecessary to risk your life and resources for random people. Most MCs have a reason for pushinh forward and it does not make sense for them to risk everything they lived their life for for random people.
Also, I don’t just read web novels on this site since this site does not have everything and if Im being honest, all books of this site are pretty disappointing and trash. Maybe instead of being on one site all the time, stop beingn closed minded and explore the internet. Than you will know what I am talking about.
FunnyMessage:Please tell me where on this site that you've found a goody two shoes.
You should read novels off this site and expand your outlook on webnovels. Plus, most novels on this site are pretty disappointing and trash.
RichBoyWinston:I'm gonna be honest with you it has been a long time since I saw a actual "good guy" MC. Be it originals or translated ones I only see morally gray ones at best with the majority of the ones I see could pass off as villains.
Do you feel good about yourself for having said that? Do you feel superior to me? If you think the novels here are trash why are you here?
Colr_Gren:Also, I don’t just read web novels on this site since this site does not have everything and if Im being honest, all books of this site are pretty disappointing and trash. Maybe instead of being on one site all the time, stop beingn closed minded and explore the internet. Than you will know what I am talking about.
For your first question, no, I do not feel good or bad for saying what I said. Second, no, I do not feel superior, I am merely just stating that you need to expand your outlook on webnovels to get the full picture. Third, although I don’t use this site often, I come here once in a while to see if I can pick up a book that will relive me of boredom when I have nothing else to read.
FunnyMessage:Do you feel good about yourself for having said that? Do you feel superior to me? If you think the novels here are trash why are you here?
Cont. of third point: Also, I like to check my inbox often so I can see if anyone has replied to my comments so I can get into arguements which again, relives my boredom.
FunnyMessage:Do you feel good about yourself for having said that? Do you feel superior to me? If you think the novels here are trash why are you here?
The tone from your post says otherwise. But if that's the excuse you're going with I guess I can't do anything about it
Colr_Gren:For your first question, no, I do not feel good or bad for saying what I said. Second, no, I do not feel superior, I am merely just stating that you need to expand your outlook on webnovels to get the full picture. Third, although I don’t use this site often, I come here once in a while to see if I can pick up a book that will relive me of boredom when I have nothing else to read.
What My outlook on this story is that the MC is a nothing but a young doctor who mistakenly killed someone and to escape from that crime he decides its better to increase his killing spree and kills people who he does not need to kill. He is someone with godlike close combat and godlike firearms. He does not need to kill. He can easily make sure that everyone chasing him lies in bed for an year before they can get it. Why would you kill when it has no benefit for you. Do you get paid for it, NO Do you get excited from it, NO Did someone ask you to do it, NO Does it benefit your escape in some way, NO. On the contrary killing people from the police force turns out from a case of accidental murder to a case of going against the authorities and killing people from the authorities which will make it much much harder for him to hide. But do you still think it was a right decision to kill the people from the “POLICE DEPARTMENT”..??..
Colr_Gren:Im going to be honest with you. When I say “righteous MC”, Im not talking about MCs that do not kill, because most MCs kill nowadays and if they don’t, there is a example of a extremely righteous MC, Im talking about MCs who save random people for the sake of making them look cool or maybe making them look like a white knight with shining armor, and if you want to go all the way, why not make them ride a white horse, maybe even a unicorn, with white flower petals drifting across the scenery with a rainbow in the backround while the mood is cheerful and gay, and of corse, don’t forget to make him handsome, to the readers. It is just unnecessary to risk your life and resources for random people. Most MCs have a reason for pushinh forward and it does not make sense for them to risk everything they lived their life for for random people.
Like I said, I am nit trying to ound superior or anything, it is merely the way I text in a regular basis. You can’t really convey emotion with text so I can see where you are coming from.
FunnyMessage:The tone from your post says otherwise. But if that's the excuse you're going with I guess I can't do anything about it
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Colr_Gren:Like I said, I am nit trying to ound superior or anything, it is merely the way I text in a regular basis. You can’t really convey emotion with text so I can see where you are coming from.
Also, he is a lunatic anyway. He is mentaly ill and finds joy in killing. So yes, killing does benifit him. It lets him have fun and have some pleasure in his life.
CosmicMystery:What My outlook on this story is that the MC is a nothing but a young doctor who mistakenly killed someone and to escape from that crime he decides its better to increase his killing spree and kills people who he does not need to kill. He is someone with godlike close combat and godlike firearms. He does not need to kill. He can easily make sure that everyone chasing him lies in bed for an year before they can get it. Why would you kill when it has no benefit for you. Do you get paid for it, NO Do you get excited from it, NO Did someone ask you to do it, NO Does it benefit your escape in some way, NO. On the contrary killing people from the police force turns out from a case of accidental murder to a case of going against the authorities and killing people from the authorities which will make it much much harder for him to hide. But do you still think it was a right decision to kill the people from the “POLICE DEPARTMENT”..??..
