I'll give you my thoughts based on the first chapter. First off, I can tell this will be a very evenly paced story and it would be great if it was kept that way, no need to rush. I like the world building and descriptions that are said and Aerich seems to be the best boy in the story. I find it very interesting so far and I look forward to seeing the characterisation of Reign and transition into child to adult. This has good potential and I definitely would love to read more. Thank you. Best of luck in writing this.
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