I'm sorry, I don't like your story. MC is pathetic, stupid, cuck and chinese rare 💩 The story is... bad, no world background, no plot. So, this is wishes dark fulfillment.
royalgrim
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me gustaMIR_Sajeeb:Don't judge book by it’s cover.. Man author didn’t even finish the novel and you said this novel bad...stupid and moron mind you have.. Author i support you keep going and entertain us by updating nee chapter’s
Almost every review he has was rated 1-2 stars with an excuse of either the mc has white hair or chinese and other pathetic stuff. He also reasons that the story sucks and said nothing at all. no reasons, nothing, just straight up gave a 1 star
MIR_Sajeeb:Yeah yeah...for you not for us
If the novel, this is not a novel; if the fanfic is bad at first, one does not have to force oneself to read it, because it is already bad. Criticisms exist to see if the book can improve at first. I'm more afraid of guys who just say it's okay for no reason than guys who say it's bad. Because what they say is bad, they say it out of anger, which is mostly true. Much more truth. Read more fanfics or books and judge if it's wrong or right. If it doesn't appeal to you, it doesn't appeal to you ... No wait. I'm not defending it, it's just that you make it sound like it's good, and it's not.
MIR_Sajeeb:Don't judge book by it’s cover.. Man author didn’t even finish the novel and you said this novel bad...stupid and moron mind you have.. Author i support you keep going and entertain us by updating nee chapter’s
Darwin111111:If the novel, this is not a novel; if the fanfic is bad at first, one does not have to force oneself to read it, because it is already bad. Criticisms exist to see if the book can improve at first. I'm more afraid of guys who just say it's okay for no reason than guys who say it's bad. Because what they say is bad, they say it out of anger, which is mostly true. Much more truth. Read more fanfics or books and judge if it's wrong or right. If it doesn't appeal to you, it doesn't appeal to you ... No wait. I'm not defending it, it's just that you make it sound like it's good, and it's not.
It's a danmachi fanfic, or at least characters from it appear, if it's not, then I'm sorry, this thing wasn't good enough to go that far. And, no, I'll be honest, I'm not good at making novels. The author might as well be better than me, and actually this fanfic isn't THAT bad, but I still didn't have enough emotional logic ... and the character's emotional logic is lacking. Well, if you like repetitive Japanese manga by the kirito on duty who shuns uncomplicated problems until they become big enough over time, this is for you. Well, not so much like that, but honestly I am sick of seeing this type of clown characters that lengthen the inevitable without a real reason. (And trust me, I've done fanfic by copying animes, and I've resorted to that. That's how it starts.)
MIR_Sajeeb:I think you should became an author... Oh who am i talking WHO's fanfic novel yet to get rating ☺️
Lol, there was a mix-up. I speak Spanish, so I depend on the browser's translator. You were talking about another novel and I took a tremendous encyclopedia out of you at once. I am sorry.
MIR_Sajeeb:I think you should became an author... Oh who am i talking WHO's fanfic novel yet to get rating ☺️