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Please stop writing in future tense, example "he would do this" that's future tense please stop, it should be 'he did this".... Bruh,........'...... . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .

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It has been fixed in future chapters. I learned over time and stopped using would for actions similar to the example you put. Thank you for your critic :)

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