Review Detail of ra11y in Dungeon Overlord System

Theres only been a few chapters so far so this is an early review but... Writing Quality: This one was unexpectedly good. The author has a good comman of english and I haven’t spotted any typos or grammatical errors. The sentence structure is well paced and varies from line to line to keep things flowing. Story and character development: The main character has a depth to him, and the plot itself feels realistic and raw. The characters are multifaceted and not just boring stock characters. I really felt the emotion during the appearance of the second creature. (Intentionally Vague to avoid spoilers) World background: Too early tp say much, but what has been revealed so far has been done through more show rather than tell. I love that. Overall, this book has the potential to become a gem. Author, please don’t drop this novel :)