Review Detail of PrugnaKerai in Serendipity...Where true love makes your destiny.

I am aware that the author's first language is not English, hence the irregularities in the grammar, but that's perfectly okay. I'm sure that if this story was written in the author's first language, the grammar would be spot on! It is clear the author has lots of hope for this novel and the potential is definetly there, however, as a reader, it feels as though something is missing; I can't quite put my finger on it. I can see that the author has passion for their novel, so keep it up!