Review Detail of goldenchild725 in Exploring During Wartime: The Unknown

The story seems good so far. Translation Quality: You need to fix it a little. Some of your sentences are just too long, and you need to shorten them by splitting them in half. Otherwise, you also have some grammar and punctuation errors. Stability of Updates: I have nothing to say here. Story Development: The development is well paced. Character design: The characters seem nice so far. World Background: Nothing to say here.