Review Detail of yu_chan_desu in Exploring During Wartime: The Unknown

Item: Exploring During Wartime: The Unknown
Rating: 4.6

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the world building is pretty detailed thus it makes you really dive into the author's creative mind. i can only suggest that maybe the paragraphs could use some breaking apart since webnovel users mostly use the app to read and it gets confusing to read long paragraphs. all in all a pretty amazing book with well written characters and plot. kudos to the author!

Exploring During Wartime: The Unknown

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Fair point, gonna try and shorten things down to the best of my ability.

3yr

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oh i meant that you could break the sentences into separate paragraphs instead of only one long paragraph. longest paragraph for wn should be 3 sentences. i hope i make sense 😅😁

JohnoTheGreat:Fair point, gonna try and shorten things down to the best of my ability.

3yr