Review Detail of GeneralAldrnari in I Am an Evil Lord Yet, Why Are They Happy to Serve Under Me?

Writing Quality ( 4/5 ) it's readable. Early chapters need some polishing but author improves from later chapters Story Development ( 2/5 ) Was having fun and enjoying the early chapters when everything is still unknown but the immersion is destroyes when you put Heirarchies of the System. Lacks explanation of high tier beings, i cant feel their strenght with words. No build up development when introducing beings that shouldn't be comprehend, and lastly The MC being the son of the 'King'. Just from knowing that destroyed the wind of my sails. Im 100% sure the MC wont face hardships and if theres tension then im sure it will be force (Him not wanting to be powerful because it'll be bored etc, ex: When kars gave him oppurtunity to have an ultimate stand) Yes Writing Op-Mc is hard if your not creative enough, and the lack of explanation of power scaling, just "King who is the lord of the multiverse etc" Is not enough. In short You need to learn how to build up the characters that will be relevant down the line. Explain the Power Scaling and dont just leave it to the audience imaginations and Wikipedia, this is a FANFIC your world your rules. Ex: Einlions Endless path, you can read how powerful the characters are just from simple detailed logical explanation. Character Design (4/5) Pictures are shown Update stability (4/5) World Background (2/5) Lacks explanation. Details are the bread and butter of any stories and if you cant explain how the world works, whats the purpose of every character/Organization and just leaving the audience to decide in our imagination then thats a headache inducing story for me. As an author its your job to guide us from the storyline just from Chapter 1 and for me whos having the hard time understanding how the World even works cause its to allover the place and lacks detail that im even forcing myself "Thats how it works" etc. I mean really A universe will who acts with human emotion "Ship sail thingy", it just boggles my mind even though its funny but still remind me how i shouldnt take the story seriously cause i know your still learning which is sad. Well thats my review