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2021-09-01 23:41

Overall : the concept of the story was unique and the plot line was interesting! The synopsis really draws the attention of the readers to dig in more into the story! Writing quality : the story had little to no mistakes made in the story, even there was a mistake, it wouldn’t affect the reading of the story. The writing style was unique and easy to read with good words used in a first person view. Updating : the updates are stable! Characters : the main character was described well in the auxiliary chapter, there were details on how the he looked like and what family background he has. He also has his own set of personality which can be seen in the story! The character dialogues were also interesting and fresh to the eyes~! World background : the magical background of other things were well written and described out by the author in the auxiliary chapter! The details given was understandable and great. The imaginative creativity put into this was great as it is created by the author! My thoughts : the story definitely has the potential to soar into great heights! Though I am not a type into action kind of books but this one was a good read and would definitely recommend it!! hope to see you continue this amazing story, keep up the good work author!!! ✨☺️

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Notes by the Author This is my very first time writing a story, and even writing in English is my first time too, so if you see any error and misspelling remember that I'll edit it right away if I reread it again. And as you all can see my story uses real-life religions, so if you're religious and been offended by my story, I'm truly sorry that I offended you. And I hope you can understand that my story is just fictitious and are not real. Writing is just my hobby and I'm still a student, so I can't really post new chapters daily. About Myth: ADPR 1) Just like I said up above, this'll use real-life religions and mythologies, but most of the stories in the religions and mythologies that I used, would be change a lot, so don't expect that all of the Gods in the mythologies I used will be added. 2)The chapters will have tons of POV changes, mainly would me the main character Haruki and his enemies and friends, and I'm gonna us both first person for Haruki and third person for the others, but other times it will change. 3)Like in many mythologies, side stories which are cannon will be created in the future so that you'll know more about the world and the characters more. Spoiler 4)Not only mythologies are gonna be added, but also famous stories and real-life people in the past are gonna be added too, so there's gonna be a chance that some of the heroes in your country are gonna be here. Also you can comment about what you like and don't like about my story, don't worry I take suggestions and criticisms.

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