Overall : the concept of the story was unique and the plot line was interesting! The synopsis really draws the attention of the readers to dig in more into the story! Writing quality : the story had little to no mistakes made in the story, even there was a mistake, it wouldn’t affect the reading of the story. The writing style was unique and easy to read with good words used in a first person view. Updating : the updates are stable! Characters : the main character was described well in the auxiliary chapter, there were details on how the he looked like and what family background he has. He also has his own set of personality which can be seen in the story! The character dialogues were also interesting and fresh to the eyes~! World background : the magical background of other things were well written and described out by the author in the auxiliary chapter! The details given was understandable and great. The imaginative creativity put into this was great as it is created by the author! My thoughts : the story definitely has the potential to soar into great heights! Though I am not a type into action kind of books but this one was a good read and would definitely recommend it!! hope to see you continue this amazing story, keep up the good work author!!! ✨☺️
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