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A Gible is 7inches tall and an Ekans is 3inches long... Wtf? A normal height for newborn gibbles are 2ft tall and a newborn ekans is 6ft long. Yeah not to mention the OPness of newborn pokemons, a Gible's egg moves are "Thrash,metal claw,double edge,twister" not bite, charge, and headbutt. And a Charmander's egg moves are "Ancient Power Belly Drum Bite Counter Dragon Rush Dragon Tail Metal Claw Wing Attack" Not Fire punch! Wtf are you doing?
World Devouring Snake (Pokemon Fanfiction)
TeaDragon1
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There are two reasons for the difference in skills. 1. As I have stated in my Auxilary Chapter, this fanficition is a blend of Pokemon with the HunterxHunter power system. I did this to give the pokemon a larger variety of moves. 2. This is a fanfiction, not the original. Limiting each pokemon to their Original skills would not only limit the fights but also make these fights more predictable. This is why I allowed them to learn skills that they would not ordinarily use while also including my own original skills. I am sorry if this upset you. As for the Pokemon sizes, this is another change that I made, to make Ren's progress more dicernable (greater improvements every time he levels up). In the future, when Ren becomes extremely long, it would not make sense for all the other pokemon to be their original heights. I do not think I was clear enough about this. I will add a note in the first few chapters, explaining what this fan fiction is, so that new readers do not get confused. I will also try to incorporate more moves from the original into this fanficition to make it more appealing. Thank you for the feedback, TeaDragon1.
Just because of your great response I'ma give it a second chance, just be 𝘤𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘳 in what modifications you would be doing in this AU.
TeaDragon1:There are two reasons for the difference in skills. 1. As I have stated in my Auxilary Chapter, this fanficition is a blend of Pokemon with the HunterxHunter power system. I did this to give the pokemon a larger variety of moves. 2. This is a fanfiction, not the original. Limiting each pokemon to their Original skills would not only limit the fights but also make these fights more predictable. This is why I allowed them to learn skills that they would not ordinarily use while also including my own original skills. I am sorry if this upset you. As for the Pokemon sizes, this is another change that I made, to make Ren's progress more dicernable (greater improvements every time he levels up). In the future, when Ren becomes extremely long, it would not make sense for all the other pokemon to be their original heights. I do not think I was clear enough about this. I will add a note in the first few chapters, explaining what this fan fiction is, so that new readers do not get confused. I will also try to incorporate more moves from the original into this fanficition to make it more appealing. Thank you for the feedback, TeaDragon1.
TeaDragon1:There are two reasons for the difference in skills. 1. As I have stated in my Auxilary Chapter, this fanficition is a blend of Pokemon with the HunterxHunter power system. I did this to give the pokemon a larger variety of moves. 2. This is a fanfiction, not the original. Limiting each pokemon to their Original skills would not only limit the fights but also make these fights more predictable. This is why I allowed them to learn skills that they would not ordinarily use while also including my own original skills. I am sorry if this upset you. As for the Pokemon sizes, this is another change that I made, to make Ren's progress more dicernable (greater improvements every time he levels up). In the future, when Ren becomes extremely long, it would not make sense for all the other pokemon to be their original heights. I do not think I was clear enough about this. I will add a note in the first few chapters, explaining what this fan fiction is, so that new readers do not get confused. I will also try to incorporate more moves from the original into this fanficition to make it more appealing. Thank you for the feedback, TeaDragon1.