Review Detail of The_Young_Flash in Kid Flash In The MHA Verse

I like the novel so far... it is amazing compared to many of the stuff on this site, and even some on RoyalRoad. I am a Flash Fan through and through so I have a lot of critique for Flash fanfics, that's why I rated this fanfic so low. If it wasn't Flash fanfic, I would have rated it higher. It doesn't change the plot at all from what I have read so far. Only introduces Flash and Kid Flash into the MHA Universe. Writing QUALITY IS excellent, with few grammatical mistakes. Story development is nada because there is nothing really changed. Character Design is arguable perfect for MHA World, but not for fanfic. The author doesn't try to bring something unique into the MHA world. The main character is just like everyone else... maybe a bit like Mineta even... The main character is just a kid who dreams about being a hero which is both perfect and not perfect... World Background... none so far... simple MHA down to the last stone... I like it, and would have rated it higher had it not been about The Flash. Just look at my name XD....