Review Detail of William_Legge in Catlyn Ollivander (Harry Potter)

i love this story. I enjoy how it highlights Harry Potter's flaws. it changes how you see him. I also like Catlyn and how she was more involved in the schools secrets then Harry. I know that it's far of in the timelines future from now but I can't wait to see what you do with the goblet of fire. however I hope you take your time to make the best story you can. take as much time as you need, take brakes when needed. if I know one thing adding to much pressure slows work. so make sure that above all you are having fun and happy with your story. thank you for your wonderful spin on a already wonderful story.